Marketin Copywriter to Beef up marketing emails -- 3

Hello everyone, I represent a fencing and security company. We are look for a marketing/sales writer from native English countries US, UK, Australia or Canada to beef up content for our marketing emails. I will send you the information and a simple email and you just need to make the copy bulked up and improved, making it more appealing to customers. Using your marketing expertise I require you to alter this copy so it sounds appealing and attractive to customers. The goal is that it stands out to them as offer than cannot be missed. Our Fencing company sells to other businesses so I need this so sound as professional and corporate as possible. I would appreciate it if you could ensure all grammar and punctuation is also correct. $7 per email to begin with. This can turn into to a long term gig depending on the quality of work.