Romance writer to edit my letter

I wrote this one page love letter and it needs some grammar and organization. Ok maybe a bit more tweaks. Feel free to add more romance. Here it is. Four years ago Judy and I met a bridgeland Starbucks. This letter is if I could go back in time and meet myself just before walking into the Starbucks. This is what I would say to myself?   Hello Gary. On October 1 2018 you walked into the bridgeland Starbucks to meet a date. This meeting will changed your life. On first glance, you will see a beautiful sexy woman walking towards you. Yes this is Judy. Her body is crazy sexy but save the look at her incredible chest for another day. Focus on her striking white hair, soft kissable lips and just stare into her amazing blue eyes and listen to her. What you will hear is Judy cares about people and puts friends and family first. She loves animals as much as you do. She aligns with your core values. You love that about her. She is very funny, smart and adventurous and she is game to try new things with you. She will amaze you and herself on the physical and mental strength she has and the insane goals she sets and accomplishes. You have searched your whole life trying to find true unconditional love where a person can crawl in your heart and make it their home. You don’t even know what that means until you meet Judy. However You will know the instant she does that and it will calm the chaos of emotions you are feeling. It will appear to be fast but feels right. Don’t over think it. You will find yourself always thinking of her and miss any moment your hearts are apart. You are not dependant on each other you just love each other’s company. Her soft hands are electrifying as you will yearn for her touch. Holding hands never gets old. You can tell her anything and have no secretes from her. She is very supportive. You 100% trust her. Sometimes you look at her or reflect on a moment such as scanning past photos when flying to work and you are flooded with so much love and joy you can’t contain it. This happens often. This is love connecting at a level unimaginable to you. Judy is your heart and soul. Judy is your love of your life. You know this love will never fail and you two will grow old together. You two believe it. You are incredibly happy. You are enjoying life to its fullest. You never had so much amazing love. You may never understand how this amazing women walked into your life at the right time at the right place. Accept that things happen and focus on what you have……happiness and extreme love. Go in have fun and get get a second date!