Help with Resume

Attn: Resume writers! I am writing a resume for a graphics design client and I really need to wow this guy. Besides rewriting my own resumes every 6 months, I don't have other experience. He wants a completely new resume that will get him the best job possible. Can you blame him? Anyway, I would like someone who is experienced in resume writing to help me out with this project. I need a second set of eyes to tell me how I can give this guy a completely up-to-date, modern resume. I'll give you the resume he initially sent me and the first draft I have come up with. Just a second pair of eyes and some good, experienced advice would be perfect. Due: Thursday, 24th Pay: $5 Thanks! Nicky