Redesign my Existing Logo

Status: Closed
Premie: $80
Mottatte bidrag: 22
Vinner: molykhan123

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Konkurransesammendrag

I love my existing logo but I am looking for some different renditions of it for promotional use. Just kind of a little redesign or reworking. Not looking to totally change the brand image. My company name is "Michigan Shooting Centers". Preferred colors are white, orange (f75a00), beige (ebebd2) and black. I would like to keep the existing "Michigan" font concept and clay target with stars, as I really like that center part of the logo. However, I am not super happy with the horizontal "swoop" underneath and connected to the "g" in Michigan.

I am open to ideas on fitting "Shooting Centers" into the logo, whether it is a slightly different circle concept or something altogether different. The current logo works well for t-shirts but is slightly too complex for embroidery and other uses. Would prefer to not have "established 2001" in the design. I kind of like the attached file "logo with subtext 2" but the "Shooting Centers" font is way too small and hidden!