Academic project report draft to business project report

Hi there! I'm a consultant and master student, having recently completed a 3-month project as part of my winter semester. The final deliverables included writing a report for the school, reflecting upon a project at the beginning of semester and the aforementioned 3-month project. The latter was performed for a company, to whom I am going to present the process and results of my 3-month work at a presentation last week. I also need to hand in a written report of that. As of now, I have a close-to-final draft of the paper I'm handing in to school, which includes some personal reflections and academic referencing. I'd like you to edit the paper I have, so it excludes information about the “Healthcare Inc” (first project of the semester), any of my personal reflections or other possibly irrelevant things to the company (Vasakronan). The report is to be more impartial and less about my personal learnings. If you're in doubt about relevance of some things, you could highlight them instead of cutting down. Now, the paper is 21 pages including images and references (pure text within the formatting of the document was 14 pages). I'd like it to be no more than 10 pages of raw text, preferably less. It would also be of great benefit if the writing was made more consistent in style. It doesn't have to be very strict and business-like (as you will see, it is currently not very strictly academic either), yet the aims are for it to be concise, coherent and clear. You may treat this as a final draft of a business report in slightly literary style. I will iterate on it myself after we agree on the final version. I'd like you to edit and revise the paper accordingly and send it to me for some comments. As I make those notes, I'd like you to make some appropriate edits and send the document to me as a final draft. I'd like you to do this in a matter of 6 to 8 hours. If I have any additional comments, you'd have 3 more hours to make edits. It would be great if you could send me some examples of your work in various styles you have operated with (business, research, journalistic etc). Thank you!