SEO - Lost my #1 Google position. Find out why.

My web site ([login to view URL])? has been #1 on Google for key phrase "remote backup"? since Google came online. I recently rewrote my first page, and it? dropped to #2 last night. I want you to compare my old page with my new one, have a look at who holds the #1 position now, and tell me how to correct my new page to recapture my #1 position. The old page: [login to view URL] The new page: [login to view URL] #1 on Google for "remote backup": [login to view URL] This is a rush job.